English work

Hi Gail,
After doing these asignments, I felt as if we weren't doing English but I realized afterwards that we were indeed working on our grammar, punctuation, etc. I'm not sure where I stand in our English course. I would like to get some feedback from you.Let me know how I'm making out on my sentences,paragraphs,etc. Does my topic sentence relate to my paragraph? I like English, I think it's the most important tool we need in business as we interact with many people everyday in our lives, especially in the business world. I think excellent communication skills can be considered an asset, don't you think? I think it would help a person in certain ways, for instance, in sales. That's it for now.